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Titi Dale Titi Dale Female, 14, Australia (3/22/2013 4:21:00 PM)

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This poem is good, if this really is your first 1 :) you use metaphors nicely, and I think this may get even better if you put some sort of rhyme scheme into it! Nice work, Poppy: D

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  • Rookie Andrew Lee (3/23/2013 6:30:00 AM) Post reply
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    Thanks! I tried to make it rhyme when i wrote it, but it kinda sounded childish if you know what i mean?Like a Dr Seuss book: / i dunno

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