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Neerja Jacob Neerja Jacob India (9/4/2012 4:36:00 PM)

Just some thoughts: Im brand new at this... please be gentle on me

What is that emptiness in my heart
It feels like somethings missing, somethings wrong
Its been there eversince I was a little child
It has stuck around with me ever since
I accomodate as many as people in my life as I can
some right some wrong
I try to run I try to hide
With as much as possible noise
The feeling still remains.....
What is that emptiness in my heart
Im still trying to figure out

You can live through your life
trying to figure out this riddle
As death approaches, you find yourself in the same situation
Asking the same question, What is this emptiness in my heart
It feels like somethings missing, somethings wrong....

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  • Muhammad Ayaz Hussain (9/7/2012 3:22:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    Hello Neerja,
    I think you write awsome poem..... you actualy write things which you have in your mind.... thats make sense..
    i can't say much about that because i am also a newbie lol.///// but still i would say Great Effort...

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    • Thoughts Of A Poet (10/20/2012 4:10:00 PM) Post reply

      i love that poem that you wrote i think it's very good wording that you have in this poem, and you have a very promising talent as a writer as well keep up the good work i would love to read more of y ... more

    • Neerja Jacob (9/18/2012 10:06:00 AM) Post reply

      Hey Muhammad, Thank you. Im no poet really. Just penned down a few thoughts. i feel most poetry is like code language. You cannot understand the thought behind it unless you know what situation the pe ... more

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