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Sandy Poo Female, 23, Canada (10/23/2005 3:58:00 PM)

Hey I wrote this imagery poem for an English assignment and it's one of the first poems I ever wrote. Feedback please :)

-TRANQUIL DAY-

Just another tranquil day
Flowers blooming early in May
Lying on my back watching the clouds
Makes me just want to sigh aloud

Oh cotton clouds of fleece
Couldn’t be finer in Greece
The gentle breeze blowing through my hair
Makes my troubles dissolve in the air

The narrow stream flowing by
As if already heading for July
And tiny birds are drinking out of this stream
And I wonder if this isn’t a heavenly dream

Such a picturesque day
My face glowing in the sun’s rays
If everyday could be so serene
Then it would be heaven unseen

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  • Rookie Alefya Najmi (11/13/2005 3:18:00 PM) Post reply
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    hey.. i think its a pretty good attempt for the english assignment.

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