(10/9/2005 5:09:00 AM)
Your poetry is good If English is not your first language your poetry is stupendous. However I would advise you to try writing in formal verse for a few future efforts. It will impose on you the discipline of shapng your expression to fit the pattern; which, in turn, will force you into a new way of saying what you want to say. Acquiring such a skill is liberating and you can apply it to your free verse if you wish.
Most of the free verse I read (not yours of course) is cryptic to the point obscurity. Poetry is an art form and art is supposed to communicate.