(3/5/2005 12:30:00 AM)
I think rhyming is more compact and better readable and as visuallly it encites
reader into it
What do you think
louis sacre croix
(2/24/2005 3:53:00 PM)
Robert I love the first one and yet I think it could have been written better had it not been in paragraph form.
Why not let the words find their own place on the paper.
Do not restrict them, let them add to the picture you paint.
(2/15/2005 7:33:00 PM)
i think both styles have their good pointss. rhyming poems have a good, definate beat and rhythm. it makes reading it like a song.paragraph free verse lets your mind wander and create its own rhythm. its like reading a story only there's much much more to it than that. it all depends on what you want the reader to feel, what form to use
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