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Madison Levine United States (2/7/2005 8:34:00 PM)

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hey yea id love to rate ur poems for you: : heres one of mine....

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Hate less; Love more
An endless ocean floating in the world
Look less; See more
A child clinging to a mothers finger
Fear less; Hope more
A young couple sharing their first kiss
Restrict less; Express more
A successful middle aged person trying to learn
Hear less; Lear more
A clear warm day in the middle of a cold bleak winter
Dread less; Experience more
A class learning and loving it
Talk less; Speak more

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  • Gina PrettyBrownEyes (2/10/2005 7:50:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    i love it, its soo inspirational. i like what you're driving at here. we spend too much time searching for things, where, if we just sat back and enjoyed life, they'd just come to us.
    HAPPY BUNNY ROCKS ;)

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