Writing Poetry

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Madison Levine United States (2/7/2005 8:34:00 PM)

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hey yea id love to rate ur poems for you: : heres one of mine....


Hate less; Love more
An endless ocean floating in the world
Look less; See more
A child clinging to a mothers finger
Fear less; Hope more
A young couple sharing their first kiss
Restrict less; Express more
A successful middle aged person trying to learn
Hear less; Lear more
A clear warm day in the middle of a cold bleak winter
Dread less; Experience more
A class learning and loving it
Talk less; Speak more

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  • Rookie Gina PrettyBrownEyes (2/10/2005 7:50:00 PM) Post reply
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    i love it, its soo inspirational. i like what you're driving at here. we spend too much time searching for things, where, if we just sat back and enjoyed life, they'd just come to us.

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