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Laura Mcdougall Female, 25, United Kingdom (1/15/2005 4:00:00 PM)

I'm 15 and just joined this website yesterday. I enjoy writing poems although they are not brilliant! I would appreciate it if you could read my poems and maybe advise me on how to improve. thank you.

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  • Madison Levine (2/7/2005 8:34:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    hey yea id love to rate ur poems for you: : heres one of mine....

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    Hate less; Love more
    An endless ocean floating in the world
    Look less; See more
    A child clinging to a mothers finger
    Fear less; Hope more
    A young couple sharing their first kiss
    Restrict less; Express more
    A successful middle aged person trying to learn
    Hear less; Lear more
    A clear warm day in the middle of a cold bleak winter
    Dread less; Experience more
    A class learning and loving it
    Talk less; Speak more

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    • Gina PrettyBrownEyes (2/10/2005 7:50:00 PM) Post reply

      i love it, its soo inspirational. i like what you're driving at here. we spend too much time searching for things, where, if we just sat back and enjoyed life, they'd just come to us. H ... more

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