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  • Rookie Jeannette Broere (4/14/2006 8:13:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply
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    I really am new here on this site...
    Are there any people outthere who can help me as a dutchie for to learn more english words I can use in my poems? ?
    I like to contact them and give a list with the words I 'need' to know! !
    Please answer me by mail.
    Thanks a lot to all poets that will help me......
    XJeannette

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  • Rookie Jose Saca (4/13/2006 9:48:00 PM) Post reply

    No one posts here. Meh...

  • Rookie Ernest Mayer (4/11/2006 9:25:00 PM) Post reply

    I promise to return the favor to anyone who is willing to check out and give me feedback on my poetry. I don't have many on here, so it'll be easy. Plus, they're short.

  • Rookie Nibedita Deb (4/9/2006 11:25:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    If I were a dropp of water:
    - G.Sivaswamy

    I look up and see this sky -
    Sometimes dark and smoetimes bright
    And I really wonder - why;

    Why do people use might and fight;
    All but or one more dropp of water!
    Believe me, this is not a silly matter!

    Daily I see the long twining queues -
    Queues of people on the Municipal taps;
    Different face with different hues.

    But all have the same mission - perhaps
    To take home a few more drops of water.
    And I think - 'what if I were a dropp of water? '

    Umm... If I was a dropp of water,
    I would have fallen from the heavens above
    Falling down and down, happily down;
    No ego of going down!
    Because that is Nature - Free from all.
    It's a pity - I can't be that way!
    If I was a dropp of water -
    While quenching a thirsty man,
    I won't think about
    His caste, creed, colour or race!
    I will flow in my own pace -
    Till I see a smile of his face.

    If I were a dropp of water,
    I would be in harmony
    With my surrounding drops!

    Never getting in the way of another drop.
    Always getting on with each other
    Filling each other's gaps.

    It's really a pity I can't be that way!
    Now that I know that I am not a dropp any ore;

    That wonderful drop,
    Which is colurless
    Yet gives colour to life itself.

    The dropp which doen't know where it lands,
    Be it a desert, Ganges, or Cauvery!
    It just goes on till -
    It returns to his source- theheaven;
    At least I can try to become one!

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    • Rookie Mike Finley (4/13/2006 4:05:00 PM) Post reply

      It's a beautioful meditation. And water even in the tap continues to flow. Even when it's stagnant it flows within itslf? It rises via evaopration... it disperses as vapor... it falls as rain... i ... more

  • Rookie Nibedita Deb (4/9/2006 11:32:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Just something I thought I should share...

    Most poems (rather all poems) relating to nature while speaking of waterbodies refer to rivers, seas, waterfalls, rain, lakes, strams, etc.

    I read an interesting poem which was about water falling from municipal taps! !

    Thank you.
    N.D.

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    • Rookie Sonny Rainshine (4/9/2006 5:50:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      Yeah. So much poetry is about 'flow.' Clouds are on the move, rivers are rushing off somewhere, time itself seems to trickle away. Tell us about the poem about water flowing from taps. Was it a goo ... more

  • Rookie Nibedita Deb (4/5/2006 8:49:00 AM) Post reply | Read 4 replies

    'A successful poem paints its own pictures, plays its own music, and move with their own flow, meeting in the sea of realization.' - Anonymous

    What other attribute can you associate with a successful poem?

    Nibedita Deb.
    Kolkata.
    India.

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    • Rookie Mary-Elizabeth Conn (4/14/2006 2:26:00 PM) Post reply

      I'd probably say something that strikes an emotional chord with the reader. If it makes you cry while writing it then it will make somebody out there cry reading it. Emotion is definately important. A ... more

    • Rookie D A Phinney (4/14/2006 2:11:00 AM) Post reply

      A really successful poem makes the reader go, 'Whoa! This must be by one of them famous poets! ' A variation on this would be that the reader can imagine someone actually paying to read this author's ... more

    • Rookie Mike Finley (4/7/2006 6:29:00 AM) Post reply

      I don't think poems lend themselves to 'success formulas.' Otherwise, we'd all be writing really good poems, every time out. Anonymous (whose work I cherish) neglected the part about saying somet ... more

    • Rookie Sonny Rainshine (4/5/2006 2:09:00 PM) Post reply

      A friend of mine says that a good poem p ... more

  • Rookie Nibedita Deb (4/4/2006 10:32:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi

    As a child I had read John Milton's 'On his blindness' - the poem had eally touched me. But probably I was lacking in something - experience. A week back the doctor told me I would have to use glasses. No not blindness, just a minute power. But today when I find that the little distant objects, which I could earlier see clearly, are now blurred, and wavy, and that I can't see it clear again without a pairof spectacles, I can't explain what I feel. Of course I am not the only the person to have an eye disorder, but i thought i should share this experience:

    Images falter from their orbs
    Circling in my cornea
    The lines are lost
    Jagged ends of dimmest silhoutte
    I see this world thrown into shades
    Or hidden behind thick glasses
    Clarity lost into vague glass paints.

    Nibedita Deb.
    Kolkata.
    India.

  • Rookie Azura Cerise (4/4/2006 10:12:00 PM) Post reply

    Nibs!

    Thank you for your kind message.
    I will remember what you said.
    You see I am very very lazy and don't feel like typing out my poems!
    No, but for a sweet friend like you, I will.

    Love,
    And kisses...
    Azura.

  • Rookie Nibedita Deb (4/4/2006 10:08:00 PM) Post reply

    * This message is for Azura Cerise.

    Well, ... Azura,
    Everything needn't to be taken seriously. You will always have a way out if you keep yourself aloof from everything that is unnecessary...Unnecessary relationships, unnecessary correspondence and unnecessary talks. Drill this into your mind that we have come to poemhunter for and only for poems. Our focus should be that and just that, and nothing else. Make sure that everything you do here educates you, enriches your faculty of mind.

    You see you are a year older than me, but somehow you are less used to what I should call as 'diversions'.: -) So leave all that and just have fun. Write some good poetry and send it to poemhunters.

    You are a real sweet girl!

    The fullest of my love,
    (And kisses too! for you)
    N.D.

  • Rookie Tiyler Durden (4/4/2006 6:15:00 AM) Post reply

    My rhyme

    I hate the polish pizza man
    I raped his dog inside my van
    I like my toast
    with a side of ham
    I raped the polish pizza man

    I hate the one-legged paper boy
    I raped his ear with an almond joy
    I beat off to the real McCoy
    I hate the one-legged paper boy



    now comes the point where I need help...
    the rules are simple-first you put who you hate
    -then you put what you raped
    -then you put something that is irrelevant to the whole thing
    -end it with the first line
    -be as disgusting and vile as possible

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