(12/10/2005 7:46:00 PM)
Just wanted to say Hello! to everyone here. brand new member here. this is some great site that i just found out.
(12/6/2005 4:41:00 PM)
Hey I'm new to the site. check out my stuff tell me what ya think.
(12/2/2005 8:54:00 AM)
Hello everyone. I'm new to poems. Recently I've written some and I really need someone to give comments so that I can improve. You know, being a newbie needs guidance. At this stage as an inexperienced writer, I am totally lost because I just don't know what is right or wrong. Can anyone help this newbie? Please kindly give me comments. Thanks.
(11/26/2005 10:29:00 PM)
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I just joined and I am not sure what I am supposed to do. I write poetry and don't have a lot of confidence in my work. I am always interested in ways to improve my poetry and what I can read for inspiration. Thanks, MeredithReplies for this message:
(1/27/2007 12:33:00 AM)
Please go to Aldo Kraas And read his poems
(11/27/2005 6:29:00 AM)
Well just post your work Merideth. And welcome to PoHO. You should go into the discussion setion of the forum. Not many members use the rest of the other sections Regards Denis Joe
- Aldo Kraas (1/27/2007 12:33:00 AM) Post reply
(11/25/2005 5:11:00 PM)
Hey, this is about my 'Awakening of Life' poem. I have gotten at least ten hits a day on it and noone has commented. If anyone who reads this would at least rate it, that would be very much appriciated.
Komarraju Venkata Vinay
(11/15/2005 12:22:00 PM)
My way of writing poetry has always been to go into the inner stillness touching which a spray of emotions pass before my minds eye. I feel them but I am not them; I sense them but I am apart from them. Then the emotions crystallize into words and the words arrange themselves into sentences and the poem is written. All as if by MAGIC. Those days when I dont touch the treasurehouse of 'intuition'I wander in the desert of dreary versification: beautiful perhaps but lifeless. To me the inner stillness is the fountain head of inspiration. What Says Thou, My Fellow Poet?
(11/14/2005 8:50:00 AM)
it was awsome really it flowed perfectly. You really mad it come alive please tell me what i can do to improve my poems
(10/29/2005 9:46:00 AM)
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im very imterested in the poem 'strange fruit' by Abel Meeropol, a.k.a. Lewis Allen. this poem was actually made into the song sung by Billie Holiday - does anyone know if Meeropol wrote any others?
(10/24/2005 8:37:00 PM)
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I just joined the site yesterday, and I would like someone to review at least one of my poems. Thanks!
(10/23/2005 3:58:00 PM)
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Hey I wrote this imagery poem for an English assignment and it's one of the first poems I ever wrote. Feedback please :)
Just another tranquil day
Flowers blooming early in May
Lying on my back watching the clouds
Makes me just want to sigh aloud
Oh cotton clouds of fleece
Couldn’t be finer in Greece
The gentle breeze blowing through my hair
Makes my troubles dissolve in the air
The narrow stream flowing by
As if already heading for July
And tiny birds are drinking out of this stream
And I wonder if this isn’t a heavenly dream
Such a picturesque day
My face glowing in the sun’s rays
If everyday could be so serene
Then it would be heaven unseen