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  • Daniel Williams (3/22/2006 8:24:00 AM) Post reply

    Hi everbody, I'm new here, and I already love this site. I've posted poetry by my friend Charlie (because he's too lazy to do it himself) I personally think he's done some good stuff, but could somebody else please read it and rate it? Thanks very much, Dan.

  • Ryan Mattock (3/11/2006 6:38:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    The Lost

    Sitting in my room, thinking of the girl who doesn’t want me.
    Feeling empty as a well with no water,
    The most intriguing creature to walk the earth,
    initially not my type at all.
    For three whole weeks it took to love,
    A girl so unique, most certainly sent from above!
    A personality more than most,
    The girl who has no love for me,
    In my mind, now a ghost.

    Ryan Mattock

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    • Mandy Faye (3/18/2006 4:42:00 PM) Post reply

      wow! there's a girl there for you in the world the right one don't worry you think you found her but god's telling you that she's taken there's more out there for you and it's not a ghost she may ... more

  • Ryan Mattock (3/11/2006 6:38:00 PM) Post reply

    The book cover

    Ravaged by the weather outside,
    ages with me, but face like time.
    Prada, gucci, all passers by,
    no one dare look incase he's high!
    But deep down inside, lives a man with a past,
    neglected by his mother and hit by his dad,
    This is a man without hope of success,
    this is a man with no permanent address,
    But he is the one with a story to tell,
    for he is the one already in hell,
    and judging by the people that pass,
    No one would listen, or give a rat's ass!
    This is a good man just down on his luck,
    this is a good man, no one gives a...

    Ryan Mattock

  • Ryan Mattock (3/11/2006 6:37:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    A journey of ends

    Cant pick up the phone, for my head is too heavy.
    Won't pick up the phone, I don't want to know.
    For the one that I loved has gone and left me,
    In a field of black roses, so far from my home!
    I have to move forward, I must go on,
    My heart is so weak, but my head is so strong,
    so that is my story, I want you to know,
    Im finally here! My beautiful home!

    Ryan Mattock

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  • Nooh Ainul Islam (3/11/2006 6:01:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Poetry is the ART of EXPRESSION.
    I wanna share my poetry and feelings to anyone who dreams of a peaceful world.
    Friendship is the greatest feelings.
    Let's be friend. 'EKTA BONDHU HOBE KI BOLO TUMI AMAR? '
    I and my poetry wanna share you the great language, Bangla, for that we gave our blood and lives, for that 21 February is THE INTERNATIONAL MOTHER-LANGUAGE DAY.
    My poetry will share you the life of a BANGALEE and the history of a land that was THE DREAM of the WEST, as was to VASCO da GAMA, COLOMBUS...
    'WE fight for living of a flower,
    WE fight for the smile of a face,
    WE fight for revive the peace of the whole world.'
    (this is a song of our LIBERATION WAR,1971.)

    my e-mail address is:

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    • A. Todd. Perkins (4/6/2006 10:58:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

      That's very beautiful, I know I'm not the first when I say, 'wouldn't it be nice if everybody read poetry and felt the same way about sharing.' If we had more people in the world teaching each others ... more

  • Ryan Mattock (3/10/2006 5:56:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Could you guys please vote or write some comments about my poetry please? I would love to hear what everyone thinks as it is my first time writing poetry. thanks. Just look my up under Ryan Mattock in poets. Thanks: @)

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    • Charles M Moore (3/17/2006 6:46:00 PM) Post reply

      Hi Ryan, I've read a few of your poems, and you write just fine, let it flow, I thought you had great confidence in what I read, I dont really know how anyone here could improve it, its as good as man ... more

  • Qulsoum Zaidi (3/9/2006 11:00:00 AM) Post reply

    Hi. I'm 13 and I've written a couple of poems..Autumn and The Magic Box. Please tell me what you think. Thanks.

  • Ice Johnson (3/8/2006 12:19:00 AM) Post reply

    Just be real, there's no right or wrong.
    What ever you feel, just write it down and be honest with real feeling and emotion.

  • Aj Cliff (3/6/2006 3:13:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    hey im newto this website 15 yearsold, been writing poems4bout 2months now, justwonderin if ne1 could read mypoems n give sum pointers on how good or bad they are plz n thankyou


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    • Aj Cliff (3/7/2006 12:55:00 PM) Post reply

      hmm this helps/helpd but btwwats a politzer or wateva lol?

    • Mike Finley (3/7/2006 11:24:00 AM) Post reply

      When I was 19 I asked a famous poet in a doorway what I could do to become a better poet. He said, 'Step aside, please.' Now I am the old one and I get to say the Annoying Guru things: 1) ... more

  • Swarnadip Chatterjee (3/2/2006 12:22:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hi, I'm a boy of 14. I love literature a lot. Wand to read my poetry and creations. Viisit my website:
    I am looking forward to hearing fro you. My id is:

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