Fayeleesa Shropshire

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Afzal Shauq! ! If someone ask me who that was a hour ago, I wouldn’t be able to tell him. Though I’ve read only a few of his poems. I think they’re absolutely beautiful and awesome. The way his words flow together like waves.

I’m only fifteen, so what do I know about poetry? Maybe nothing but still I know that poetry can make all the differences. I mean, poetry has helped me into many ways to count.
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I try to love him.
He could decide what he wants.
My heart is open,
to accept care and love. Try
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Anger equals problems.
Jealousy makes troubled people.
Revenge destroys souls.
Two faces can be the start
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4.

Restless sleep, motion
tired and sleepy dragging
along not wanting
to get up, see another
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Independance is
what I need though I'm deprived
of it and rewards.
Why can't she let me go?
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My mistakes are made.
I can now not take them back.
They are carved in stone.
I wish I could rewind time.
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My grades are something I take pride in. Like a religion I must follow.
They have to stay as high as possible. A's are what I want like a child
asking for ice cream. My GPA is the lightbof my life, the reason for my
hard working persistance. It means everything to me. It's what will
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A friend is a chapter, our friendship is the book with each one of us
writting one chapter at a time. A friend is as comforting as a Teddy bear.
At times you're as mean as a bull. Other times hour walking as if you're
a zombie. A friend is a piece of cake, our friendship is the bakery shop.
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Hurt filled eyes and pain.
Tears, destruction, sorrow
are the enemy.
Run and hide or stand and face.
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Loneliness. Alone,
I sit with nobody with me.
He can not be found.
How I long to be near him,
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11.

May hopes and dreams float.
Let fears die down in despair.
Aspirations are
the key to successful life.
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12.

Daydream on a cloud
float into space of your own.
Imagination.
Create you own universe.
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Love sick children are
mindless and gullible.they
have blind sighted affection.
Pain is what they'll find with
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14.

Wholeheartedness and
devotion are completed.
Trustworthiness is
found here in the depths of heart.
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Anger withheld is
not good. Releasing it can
result in severe
consequences. Ignore it
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16.

Sensation in thoughts
of our first kiss, linger on
my lips. The Essence
of his touch still burns my flesh.
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For a penny is just a token,
thoughts can cost a fortune.
Though words are only spoken
they can make hearts be broken.
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Happiness is a common goal.
Where it is found for you I do not know.
Happiness warms the soul.
Warmth that is easy to show.
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I think I'm taken for granted.
The looks I get are always slanted.
I try to get ahead in life
because one day I'll be a wife.
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The Best Poem Of Fayeleesa Shropshire

I Group Afzal Shaqu With Jane Austen And Charlotte Bronte'

Afzal Shauq! ! If someone ask me who that was a hour ago, I wouldn’t be able to tell him. Though I’ve read only a few of his poems. I think they’re absolutely beautiful and awesome. The way his words flow together like waves.

I’m only fifteen, so what do I know about poetry? Maybe nothing but still I know that poetry can make all the differences. I mean, poetry has helped me into many ways to count.

Afzal Shauq’s poetry is more than just « roses are red, violet’s are blue. » His poetry makes you think, In his poem ‘Blind World’, he talks about how the world is blind to the rules of life. Yea, the world tries to hide the fact that darkness exists and is unavoidable. Death is a part of life but the world wants to shut it out and push it away. This is such a honest and raw poem. This is why it is one of my favorites by Afzal Shauq, among others. I also like ‘Detaching From You’, ‘Desire to Meet’, and ‘Beauty Pride’. But the poems I absolutely fell in love with are ‘Confusion of Love’, ‘An Answer’ and ‘Anthem of Deprived Love’.

As I said before I’m only fifteen but when I read Afzal Shauq’s poems I feel as though I’ve lived for a million life times. His poetry takes me through a time of war, love, and lost. These words that he has written inspire me.

I’ve always wanted to become a writer and I love poetry. The pure beauty and truth of his poems give ma awakening of what I can really do with the power of my words.

I see just by reading Afzal Shauq’s work that he’s touched so many lives by the power of words. This proves to me and the rest of the world that words are just as powerful as actions, so they shouldn’t be taken lightly.

Afzal Shauq has told me that my words are sweet and written well. This information that I never knew. I’ve always felt that my poems were just the result of my rambling about love and emotions. So Afzal has opened my eyes to the beauty of an elegance of which I write in. I feel this comes from my knowledge of the past times, where authors wrote with beauty and elegance with such an ease.

Authors such as Jane Austen, Charlotte Bronte’ and William Shakespeare. These are the authors that I group Afzal Shauq with, for he also has beauty and elegance in his wise words. That is something that not only writers and poets strive for but any self respecting person.

Fayeleesa Shropshire
Salisbury, NC / United States
www.poemhunter.com/fayeleesa-shropshire

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