Don Tiedemann

Don Tiedemann Poems

they are
the margin notes of city life
details optional to any story
...

The fireflies rise like dust from a dirt road,
like hot ash from an untended fire.
June is contraband, ill-gotten time
to be squandered like prize money.
...

A child is not picked up after practice.
School is over. Nothing left but the
late afternoon, ungraded activities....
soccer, band, chess club. No more
...

The honking geese
are flying low.
They winter near
here on the lake
...

the sun pulls a kilroy
over the trees in the east.
sluggo wakes a lonely boy
in his dumpster house
...

With displeasure
the moon regards
the empty house
of Jeff and Sue,
...

I need to hang out with a smarter crowd.
So many words I have read but never
Had the pleasure of hearing spoken aloud.
...

I know that nine oclock
after the traffic and
before the heat is
the best hour.
...

I.


In the harbor the white boats bob,
...

The Best Poem Of Don Tiedemann

Smokers

they are
the margin notes of city life
details optional to any story

they are
the dragon guardians of back porch beer kegs
fiercely discharging smoke thru pursed lips

they lean
in garage doorways
reading folded papers

they sit
on the office building stairs
next to melting snow

pulling unbuttoned sweaters tight
discussing whatever a lit match
might stimulate

they worry
and sometimes even talk
about their weight, children, sex life...

and then
dismiss it all in the brief cease-fire
life will honor with smoke-filled lungs

they are
luckless front porch anglers
fishing with no worms and no hopes

Don Tiedemann Comments

Brian Purdy 05 January 2012

To the writer: Liked your poem 'I Know...'. Feel, however, that poem might better conclude with second last stanza, which I find both witty and truthful. Present conclusion seems to add nothing the poem might do very well without.

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Julie Vognar 04 January 2012

Yes, I like them too.

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John Raubenheimer 03 January 2012

I like your poems Don. It's encouraging to find a poet of your calibre on these pages.

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