Dave BenOdafe

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  • Chris Amalu (10/16/2010 6:09:00 AM)

    its a gift he has going through the furnace and it will surly come out gold.we are not after perfection but progress.he is an exceptional poet given the right muse.

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Two Hearts With One Soul

We played hide and seek like little kids,
Hopping round the mulberry tree.
Chased each other down the garden,
Sat by the lake throwing pebbles,
They caused a ripple in the waters as it did our hearts,

At the lakeside, escaped from the world's cares,
We laid, side by side at its bank,
Beat from several strokes down its breadth,

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