Dave BenOdafe

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  • Chris Amalu (10/16/2010 6:09:00 AM)

    its a gift he has going through the furnace and it will surly come out gold.we are not after perfection but progress.he is an exceptional poet given the right muse.

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My Dreams

We laid together skin to skin entwined in fierce passion.
Heart to heart, head to head, eye to eye in ecstatic dight.
Our lips lock’d In a wet kiss, my will to her cession.
Driven to yonder height,
Serenaded by the chords and notes of the serene night.
Bask’d in the envious stare of the starry stars,
The passion that quicken my heart to beat;
Salve my mind to behold the wondrous morrow.
Passion in my veins a liquid fire flows. Her heat,

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