I see a talent here, although I didn't read one poem that I felt was really finished. I hope you are reading poetry- maybe some publications like American Poetry Review and Poetry. Keep writing...I'm sincere about believing in your talent.
Melodies In Silences
In your silences I hear a melody no one else hears In your eyes I see landscapes Places where no one dares to go They are harsh and violent; sometimes cold and desolate; Yet I walk though them Until it is dark and make fires