I see a talent here, although I didn't read one poem that I felt was really finished. I hope you are reading poetry- maybe some publications like American Poetry Review and Poetry. Keep writing...I'm sincere about believing in your talent.
Planting The Evermore
I am falling in love with a secret admirer, who is not so secret any longer. He is the fast moving, enigmatic gardener who blooms with the flowers, of unknown origins and indistinguishable beauty, beside every of my forest pathways