I see a talent here, although I didn't read one poem that I felt was really finished. I hope you are reading poetry- maybe some publications like American Poetry Review and Poetry. Keep writing...I'm sincere about believing in your talent.
I Am The Ocean
I am 60% the ocean, the terrible and alluring, the flowing and rising, sinking; we, together, are pulled by the moon; one heavy, corporeal being, as the poisons in the sky poor into the ground we touch, seeping into our pores, tainting blue to black,