Love is not something you order from a restaurant. You have to cook it yourself. You cannot do it perfect from a recipe book either - you have to do it by experimentation. A little of this - hmm, too salty? Add a little sugar?
Too sweet! Don't go to extremes. So, are you suffering? A suffering geek? Good. Then, suffer more. By this method be human like the rest of humanity. Intelligence is not all. Reality check. I can see the gradual change in character in your poems. Good. Keep on.
Whatever you feel from inside, your pen shows it all.
I believe you are a realistic romantic. I liked your poems.
Keep up the work.
And in the meantime, you are also invited to check out my poems and comment.
your poems are really good and u are pretty talented at romantic poems but i think they would be better if they rhymed because it would make the poems flow easier and being a romantic poem the flow is really important