Treasure Island

Aditi Khandelwal

(December 27 1997)

Comments about Aditi Khandelwal

Enter the verification code :

  • Koena Mokoena (4/30/2012 3:53:00 AM)

    This is the most important poem, because it is about exposing the personal attributes, hence you should be proud of who you are...

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Harindhar Reddy (1/24/2012 12:03:00 PM)

    With sweet poems For My Mom, Still A Stranger, The Little Girl, Accident and many others, This teen sensation stoops to conquer the poetry and the world!

    My words may sound pompous but truth her poetry picture perfect like Sachin's Cover Drive. She got the class, she got the style But she mass, ma ma Mass! Rated A1 + a big Treat!

    Read hear poetry,100% entertainment guarantee with lifetime warranty! Happy birth to her mom in the heaven!

    Says one Harindhar Reddy paisano and fellow poet from her country, India.

  • Koena Mokoena (12/12/2011 7:40:00 AM)

    I like this poem ' Phases Of Moon', because it reminds me of my previous & future life. Hence, you can be the famous poet across the globe like me. I have been invited to India to recite my poems wouldn't you like to attend with me? Your correspondence will be highly appreciated.

    Have a nice day!

    Mr. Koena France Mokoena
    Country: South Africa

  • Sonali Sings (11/29/2011 11:00:00 AM)

    Aditi invited me to comment on her poem 'Thank You' but her poem after poem kept me reading and asking for more. Her innocent talent makes her write from an entirely novel perspective, very refreshing. Best wishes for a budding poetess!

  • Eduardo Mazzini (10/23/2011 10:11:00 PM)

    Your heart is really in the right place!

The Burning House

How thee say
The mason’s house burned in peace?
O’er the burning walls,
His daughter shrieks.

Mason wailed in the field,
That boy around the corner screeched.
Maybe he thought nothing,
When the fence he breached.

[Hata Bildir]