abhimanyu kumar.s

Rookie - 55 Points [thala] (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

Comments about abhimanyu kumar.s

  • Rookie Joseph Wagachima (9/12/2012 8:06:00 AM)

    interesting reading. give your works more thought. give them life. give them timelessness

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  • Rookie Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (8/24/2012 7:16:00 AM)

    Abhimanyu Kumar, I salute you my younger brother. Your poems must be a feather to your cap of being a good son and human being. Keep writing..

  • Rookie Prem Kumar (8/11/2012 9:41:00 AM)

    sir looking at your biography i was amazed......................i am proud to be your student

  • Rookie - 0 Points Gareth Simpson (6/30/2012 5:29:00 AM)

    Nice biography, you should help me write one lol

  • Rookie Emebet Mesfin (2/16/2012 9:16:00 AM)

    liked what I read so far. kind of identified myself with some of your poems. they sound so natural. write on, brother! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

  • Rookie John Cabrera (1/26/2012 4:18:00 PM)

    I like your poem.Very good use of imagery. I pictured everything you said. Good job.

  • Rookie John Cabrera (1/26/2012 4:17:00 PM)

    I like the poem. Good use of imagery. I really pictured a soul.

  • Rookie - 0 Points Allan Farran (1/15/2012 8:50:00 AM)

    Thankyou for the invit to read your poetry it was very good I like the simplicity. You take a look at my poems specially forest and whatever your will

  • Rookie Michele Kostelnik Parrillo (1/11/2012 3:06:00 PM)

    Filled very much with intrigue and then comical. I liked it. You are a strange fellow in a good way. I enjoy people who are different from the normal everyday sorts. good poem sadness and laughter Michele

  • Rookie - 392 Points Rajendran Muthiah (12/31/2011 10:15:00 PM)

    The bard in you is travelling from love, despair and disappointment, spirituality and death yet resolves to live and die as a poet. Don't get vexed. Your exploration into the realm of mysticism has just started.
    Take some care on clarity and grammar and you will be blooming. Thanks.

Best Poem of abhimanyu kumar.s

I Was Dead

I had my dinner and
Slept around 10 of night
After a couple hour or so
I found myself dead
Ya, I was dead
My body had become motionless
Eyes shut, hands erect
What about my dreams and aims
All gone, all shattered
Man, I was dead
What next?
Possibly burn, bury and ashes
Suddenly I heard someone shouting
Idiot get up! it's 7 of morning
If you want to know the truth
I was sleeping.

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The Kumpa

I struck the board and cried,
No more! I will be in this paradise.
The paradise of Kumpa's and graves,
Having steady looks and shapes.

Those who have strained to build the nest,
The nest of Kumpa's from the west.
Melted their ideologies in the east,
Diminished the traditional laws in the east.

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