abhimanyu kumar.s

Rookie - 84 Points [thala] (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

Comments about abhimanyu kumar.s

  • Rookie Joseph Wagachima (9/12/2012 8:06:00 AM)

    interesting reading. give your works more thought. give them life. give them timelessness

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  • Rookie Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (8/24/2012 7:16:00 AM)

    Abhimanyu Kumar, I salute you my younger brother. Your poems must be a feather to your cap of being a good son and human being. Keep writing..

  • Rookie Prem Kumar (8/11/2012 9:41:00 AM)

    sir looking at your biography i was amazed......................i am proud to be your student

  • Rookie - 0 Points Gareth Simpson (6/30/2012 5:29:00 AM)

    Nice biography, you should help me write one lol

  • Rookie Emebet Mesfin (2/16/2012 9:16:00 AM)

    liked what I read so far. kind of identified myself with some of your poems. they sound so natural. write on, brother! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

  • Rookie John Cabrera (1/26/2012 4:18:00 PM)

    I like your poem.Very good use of imagery. I pictured everything you said. Good job.

  • Rookie John Cabrera (1/26/2012 4:17:00 PM)

    I like the poem. Good use of imagery. I really pictured a soul.

  • Rookie - 0 Points Allan Farran (1/15/2012 8:50:00 AM)

    Thankyou for the invit to read your poetry it was very good I like the simplicity. You take a look at my poems specially forest and whatever your will

  • Rookie Michele Kostelnik Parrillo (1/11/2012 3:06:00 PM)

    Filled very much with intrigue and then comical. I liked it. You are a strange fellow in a good way. I enjoy people who are different from the normal everyday sorts. good poem sadness and laughter Michele

  • Freshman - 925 Points Rajendran Muthiah (12/31/2011 10:15:00 PM)

    The bard in you is travelling from love, despair and disappointment, spirituality and death yet resolves to live and die as a poet. Don't get vexed. Your exploration into the realm of mysticism has just started.
    Take some care on clarity and grammar and you will be blooming. Thanks.

Best Poem of abhimanyu kumar.s

I Was Dead

I had my dinner and
Slept around 10 of night
After a couple hour or so
I found myself dead
Ya, I was dead
My body had become motionless
Eyes shut, hands erect
What about my dreams and aims
All gone, all shattered
Man, I was dead
What next?
Possibly burn, bury and ashes
Suddenly I heard someone shouting
Idiot get up! it's 7 of morning
If you want to know the truth
I was sleeping.

Read the full of I Was Dead

Chapter 21: An Aftermath

Spinning eyes, pretty lips,
Golden strip
Presence sign of purity,
In the Closest of divinity,
Gave me a sound completion.

She was an Angel
Appeared, rendered and disappeared.
Clouds here and there

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