Abdul Wahab

Silver Star - 3,796 Points [Northern Wind , Suriya , Suzlon , Ruhida]

Comments about Abdul Wahab

  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (2/4/2014 2:15:00 AM)

    comment on ''Freedom''


    excellent

    Deepak Kumar Pattanayak14 hours ago
    Rightly said freedom with a cause is not freedom........it should be spontaneous and unconditional..
    very well composed.............
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    Huh


    Courtney Walden14 hours ago
    Wow, not what I was expecting. Interesting

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  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (2/1/2014 6:18:00 AM)

    comment on poem '' children ''


    Beliefs being forced upon children without giving them other options is suffocating their minds.


    syykkogrl3 hours ago
    I think this is a great poem with a wonderful point.

  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (2/1/2014 6:15:00 AM)

    comment on poem ''children ''


    Powerful Message


    Tracy Bollinger3 hours ago
    You hit the nail on the head. How can they make the world a better place if they're forced to parrot our beliefs. We see where that got us.

  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (1/28/2014 5:51:00 AM)

    COMMENT ON POEM ''broom ''


    Jeff Cannon, - - - - Wow! the image in your hands peals away the coverings to reveal layered symbols, body metaphors take on a worldly live gripped by wayward culture and its madness, spoken with an elegance that tells its truth in ways hopefully to be heard and then deeply felt, so we know what we really need to sweep - thank u Abdul Wahab for this physical and poignant poem

  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (1/26/2014 1:55:00 PM)

    ON POEM '' LOVE OF SAND ''

    Girija Anavangot24 hours ago
    the supreme theme of love! the natural instinct in universe! the quench for union all arround in nature. sea and shore, wind and sand, night and day the unending phenomenons- well written.

  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (1/19/2014 1:11:00 PM)

    Comments on your poem ''Ya Ali''
    Commented on 1/19/2014 8: 15: 00 AM by Rex McCoy

    Some great mottos to keep in practice :) Enjoyed

  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (1/15/2014 1:01:00 AM)

    Comments on your poem'' Broom''
    Commented on 1/14/2014 6: 51: 00 PM by Andrea Dietrich

    very cool idea writing as if you are a broom. I really like this

  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (1/11/2014 11:27:00 PM)

    Comments on your poem'' Blooming Love''
    Commented on 1/11/2014 4: 10: 00 PM by Funom Makama

    Beautiful.. Well written. Keep on writing and well done for being among the top 100 most active poets.

  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (1/11/2014 3:34:00 PM)

    Jeff Cannon ___on my poem - - - - - - ''BLOOMING LOVE'' - - - ah, that love could over come the grid that slices, separates, tears the us apart from each other, puts splinters in our hands, rocks in our eyes, so many declensions manufactured by the conqueror, even when it's steel soul boot is gone, its shadow presses down the grid sharp, barbed toothed stabs impale the heart/ feeling lobotomized, erases our flesh, twists us into vaporous creatures who speak the language of fangs, leap to possess as the one is possessed, feast till nothing's left but the great kill, the one that sucks bodies into anguished flames and the grand wrestling begins between blood and computerized brain thought that sizzles dead when only a drop of the red wine spills over its plastic casement, metallic flesh/ ah that those lips punched into asphalt streets could heal and kiss again beauty dangling black, swollen blue, whispering the answer to the eternal riddle, the one Alexander tried to find by cheating, just hacking the knot, hacking so much, he chopped away the answer, the one the wind scooped up in her gentle fingers, carried on her breathe, carries still, the one, when night turns deep silent, softly whispers, love... love... my lost children... love... is the... answer... - Well, don't know where that came came from, but thanks for opening that door Abdul Wahab, with your poem

  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (1/10/2014 2:06:00 PM)

    Comments on your poem'' I Am Dead And That Is Too Quite Long Before''
    Commented on 1/10/2014 12: 11: 00 PM by Syam Madappattu

    A question on one's self..dual perception..rendered in the simplest language..I LIKE THIS POEM..

Best Poem of Abdul Wahab

>≫≫I Want To Die

Heavenly cursed and heavily sinned I
No more i like to add them, so, I want to die
And I want to become a holy ghost
Whom the people would like the most.
Like the retreating soldiers I like to come back
To my own permanent and eternal home
You may call it a suicide or martyrdom.

In my real home I see the news
Coming from the lipstick coated lips
In the television of my molten death
People are sobbing with a heavy breath.
The atmosphere is heavy and they feel the pain
This thrills me and gives a feeling of gain.


The only son of my ...

Read the full of >≫≫I Want To Die

>≫Adolescence

A lot of praise and admiration I got when I was full of innocence
Now, I am under crook clumsy seductive adolescence.
Keeping head straight, running life difficult a lot
Sensing the senses makes me a bewildered pot.
Unknown pricks me, the soul is heavy and restless
The world appearing suffocated ruthless.
Sentiment creeps in, around hard blowing the wind.
I do not know how to cool and keep quiet my mind.

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