Pearls Of Tears,2nd Edition Poem by Matloob Bokhari

PEARLS OF TEARS
MATLOOB BOKHARI
O my beloved, O pride of the moon
O crown of the luminous sky
He who sits beside you by a flowing stream
And drinks a full cup from your hands
His lips utter no other name but you
His eyes see no other sight but you
His ears listen no other voice but you
His mind thinks no one else but you
His heart embraces no one but you
Moon, stars, birds -all sing your hymn
When all lamps of light are out at night
Flares of forgotten lore burn all around
Pale with sorrow, flattering dreams descend
O beauty of rose, O my heart's secret
Your sad fancy runs through my veins
I weep even in my sleep for you
Atypical Blonde: I love that poem so very very much; it is perfectly beautiful.
Karyn Walker: Beautiful lines dearest brother Matloob.
Nikluss6 -: '''''O my beloved, O pride of the moon
O crown of the luminous sky
He who sits beside you by a flowing stream
And drinks a full cup from your hands''''
AMAZING! ! ! AMAZING! ! ! AMAZING! ! ! ! !
'''''His lips utter no other name but you
His eyes see no other sight but you
His ears listen no other voice but you
His mind thinks no one else but you
His heart embraces no one but you''''
SO PASSIONATE AND POWERFUL! ! !
Simply EXCELLENT! ! ! ! ! !
'''''Moon, stars, birds -all sing your hymn
When all the lamps of light are out at night
Flares of the forgotten lore burn all around
Pale with sorrow, flattering dreams descend'''
INCREDIBLE! ! ! ! ESPECIALLY THE FIRST LINE! ! ! ! but the entire stanza is just
perfection! ! ! ! !
'''''O beauty of the rose, O my heart's secret
Your sad fancy runs through my veins
I weep even in my sleep for you'''''
BEAUTIFUL! ! ! ! !
Wow! ! ! ! This ENTIRE poem was just EXCELLENT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
It was full of REAL emotion and POWERFULLY WORDED! ! ! ! ! ! !
EXCELLENT WORK! ! ! ! ! !
PEACE BE EVER WITH YOU MARVELLOUS POET FRIEND MATLOOB! ! !
Thomas A. Robinson! Sad loss for you weep even in your sleep. O pride of the moon, O pride of the luminous sky.Her beauty beyond com. IT IS YOUR MASTERPIECE!
Alison Breskin! VERY PRETTY
Leila Beitlahm: A lovers lament on lost love and beauty. Whose beauty must be no more. And even the moon cries to read these lines
Narendhira Arj: - Loved it! My favorite line is: And drinks a full cup from your hands His lips utter no other name except you His eyes see no other sight except you His ears listen no other voice except you.The feelings in the poem seem clear nd sincere very nice. An engaging read with profound meaning
Nicely penned!
J Coop - Title: Great title, heartfelt poem
My favorite line is: 'O crown of the luminous sky'
Overall great poem.
Raj Nandy: The theme of the poem my friend, has been expressed poetically very well! -Raj
Sylvia Frances Chan: Thank you, dear Matloob, merci beaucoup! Vous êtes divine Sincerely, Sylvia FC
Munashe Mumbama: thank you, I had a great read
Don Bouchard: Lost joy is well presented here. Tight and lyrical and could be set to music, I think....
Seema Chowdhury: a poignant write
Lidi Morphosis: Very flowing. I like this! The nature of romance...
Cindy: Beautiful.: - Your pen has power to make reader laugh, weep and dance