Burden Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Burden

Rating: 4.8


Don't worry about me
I know I am a burden
And I am old enough to understand
That I am just that
I always felt like an extra wheel
So, don't worry about my welfare
I am fine
I don't know why you worry so much
It will be OK-- just me and my dog
Yes, I am a little lonely
But I'll get over it eventually
I'm adult now
I hate to be trouble

Sunday, June 11, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: solitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 11 June 2023

LeeAnn, your poem is indeed brilliant! You've managed to convey facetiousness and sarcasm in the same poem. THAT is a stroke of GENIUS! Love it, my friend!

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Dear Richard says that nso, I am with his support, he is like my elder bro's name also richard, whatever Richard says, it's OK, dear LeeAnn. TOP Marks!

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Richard Wlodarski 11 June 2023

2) And you know that I mean that without diminishing your sense of pain! I will always be there for you, my poet friend! !

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M. Asim Nehal 12 June 2023

We all are here on earth with a purpose and we serve greater purpose, the pain you feel of being a burden on other is nothing but the patience test for those around you and for you it is good for writing some heartfelt Poetry.5****.

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M. Asim Nehal 12 June 2023

I wonder if earth starts to complain the same where will we go? Imagine Earth says 'You all are burden on me, get away'.

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Koffi Sossou 02 August 2023

'I always felt like an extra wheel'. This is despair and self-loathing. You are more than what people make you believe. You are a champion and winner. Good poem though.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 August 2023

I too admire the excellent comment of Richard. Brilliantly presented.

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To be a trouble less one is the real ascetic life which is godly, decent and manly

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S H 12 June 2023

Not at all, God is great, HE is with all of us.

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Sheeya Hacks 12 June 2023

I join my hand to lend you my shoulder but chain your dog for me. Good poem. Just kidding for dogs.

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